Book Review 2When I write a longish review, I put most of my work into having the piece work well as reader's guide, keeping my own views to myself as much as possible until the end. But since I've signed up for an e-mail subscription to the Notre Dame Philosophical Reviews (just go here to get it), I've noticed that this practice is by no means uniform. Consider the beginning of Bruce Russell's recent review of James Sterba's From Rationality to Equality:

In this book James Sterba sets out to answer two central questions in moral philosophy: (1) Why be moral? and (2) What does morality require? (see Sterba's Preface and Introduction, esp., pp. 1-2). He understands (1) to be the question (1a): Are we always rationally required to do what we are morally required to do? However, I think the fundamental question is (1b): Is there always most reason to do what we are morally required to do? I may be rationally required to take a pill that I have overwhelming epistemic reason to believe will save my life when I am really not dying and the pill will actually kill me (imagine some doctor wants me dead and has presented me with conclusive evidence to make me believe that I am dying and that the pill is my only hope for survival). But in this case what there is most reason to do is to refrain from taking the pill even though the rational thing to do is to take the pill. I think what we want to know when we ask, "Why be moral?" is whether there is always most reason to do what is morally required. We want to know whether it is necessarily true that there ismost reason to do what is morally obligatory, not whether it's necessarily true that we are justified in believing that there is most reason to be moral.

I worked hard to try to figure out what Russell meant here, and then was frustrated to find that the phrase "most reason" doesn't occur in the review itself.


The review itself has a lot of Russell correcting Sterba in this manner. It's interesting, and Russell's introducing the concept of "intermediate needs" does a lot of useful explanatory work, but I couldn't help wishing that Russell would get out of the way a little bit more and let Sterba speak.

I don't know if that's a stupid reaction. I mean, one does understand Sterba better when one understands the weak spots and how they might be patched. I think with respect to Russell's review, the saving grace is that it is on the whole sympathetic to Sterba's broader project. His criticisms are always tied in with friendly amendments. But my intuition is that the level of intrusiveness would have been a disaster if the piece had been even just a little bit more critical, and I'm still a little bit uncomfortable with it.

Am I off base here?

The blitheness of the level of intrusion gets the better of Russell by the end of the piece. The ultimate paragraph begins with the following assertion (which is immediately dropped):

So what should we do? As a practical matter, we should do all we can to increase the amount of renewable resources and to limit the size of the world's population so that there is enough to go around for everyone to lead a decent human life even on the highest interpretation of that notion.

Do I really have to do all I can to lower the birth rate in countries with a vastly different ethnic makeup than my own? Isn't there something sinister about that? Aren't countries with declining populations doing most of the polluting and destroying of resources anyhow? Who is going to be in charge of doing the limiting? Why end a piece with a bald assertion about something that in itself presents so many problems?

I think Russell is aware that this comes out of left field, because the final footnote ends by laying this dead mouse squarely on Sterba's doorstep, i.e. " in conversation Jim suggested the importance of limiting, perhaps even reducing, total population to insure that everyone now and in the future can lead a decent human life." I'm not a libertarian (having been convinced years ago by Sterba's own critique of the cult of negative liberty), but I can't help but to find this kind of thing way too problematic to suggest in an offhand way. Moreover, it would have been avoided had Russell felt bound by norms prohibiting quite so much intrusiveness in a review.

[Notes:

*During the interregnum caused by Eric's absence , we're going to try to continue Eric Schliesser's Notre Dame Philosophical Reviews ReviewsTM, though it's not clear how successful we can be. None of us can do this as well as he did. Please be charitable, the rest of us are new at this. If the posts end up uniformly stinking, we won't try to fill his shoes in this manner.

One thing we'd really like to do is have more people respond to their own reviewed books in NDPR and elsewhere (Michael Strevens' piece was a pretty great proof of concept), but we haven't quite worked the mechanics of this out. When we do we'll do a post on that. In the interim please contact us (our e-mails are on the author's page) if you want to pitch a guest post along the lines of Strevens''.

I realize I'm hereby jacking my own thread, but I had two youtuby reactions to Eric's announcement of the interregnum. First, and without irony:

Second, also without irony:

Even though my initial reaction was that of Lord Vader's , I know that Eric's going to keep rocking out even if he has to go to Greenland to do so, and if/when he comes back to Newapps he'll have quite a story to tell.]

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10 responses to “Is there some kind of Aristotelian mean for NDPR reviewer intrusiveness?*”

  1. BLS Nelson Avatar

    About the final paragraph of the review. It depends on whether the use of “we” is meant to describe a community or an aggregate. I read it as being an expression of a desire to see us take collective responsibility for some states of affairs. If so, then (on one account) the individuals need only take responsibility for playing their part in the collective, whatever their part happens to be. The weight of the burden of responsibility will be different depending on what role you play in the system that is guilty of bringing about the tragedy.

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  2. Jon Cogburn Avatar
    Jon Cogburn

    But if that’s right isn’t it even more surreal to focus on population control when writing to an audience of largely white Americans?
    At best it’s a strange non sequitur that undermines confidence in philosophers’ ability to practically apply their wisdom. First world population is declining, yet we’re the ones doing the most to choke the planet with pollution.

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  3. BLS Nelson Avatar

    There’s certainly an ambiguity there. But it does not sound surreal if we take the ‘we’ to designate the global collective and not just the first world professional philosophers, and that was my initial reading.
    (Sorry to be nitpicky. It was a small point, and I’m probably zeroing in on something that probably doesn’t deserve a lot of attention in the context of the post. — e.g., I’m there with Vader mourning the loss of Eric.)

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  4. Alexander Avatar
    Alexander

    Jon, you wrote Michael Scrivens, but meant Michael Strevens.

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  5. Jon Cogburn Avatar

    Alexander,
    Ooh thanks. I’m always doing crap like that. Fixed now.

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  6. Jon Cogburn Avatar

    It still strikes me as odd given that the audience is going to be relatively wealthy white people thinking about planning the populations of brown people. Even if they are part of the “we,” the subset of this “we” reading the article is a subset whose population is already declining. The other thing is that I think population growth is something reasonable people of good will can disagree about, while environmental destruction is not.
    But not nearly as odd as having Vader do a hackneyed “Nooooo!” Part of Star Wars lore is that Luke Skywalker was scripted to fall to his knees and do a “Nooo!” upon first seeing the charred corpses of Aunt Beru and Uncle Owen, but that the actors revolted against (then) Chancellor Lucas. The scene is obviously much, much better for eschewing Noooo!ism).
    And then in Revenge the final conversation between Obi Wan Kenobi and Anakin would be ripe for “Noooo!” at the hands of a lesser director, but instead is really powerful with Kenobi yelling that Anakin was like a brother to him and Anakin just screaming “I hate you!” (the dialogue somehow got much better between the second and third film, and the actor playing Anakin and actress playing Queen Amidala somehow figured out how to act non-woodenly under Emperor Lucas’ direction; alas they didn’t share this with the poor sap taking on Mace Windu’s role).
    The most nauseating thing is that in the newest director’s cut of Return, Lucas puts in a gratuitous flashback to the Lord Vader’s “Noooo!”
    On the bright side, it is very helpful to have discovered that Lucas is a Sith Lord. This being said, we still don’t know if he’s the apprentice or master. If Abrams makes a movie unretconable with respect to Expanded Universe then it will be clear that the master is of an alien species that in fact has these weird mouse ears.

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  7. Neil Avatar
    Neil

    A halfhearted defence: empirically it is probably true that the most effective way of WEIRD people limiting the population of non-WEIRD is by raising the living standards of the latter, which seems to be reliably correlated with the demographic transition.And the most effective way of doing that is to stop exploiting them or exporting wars. So even if the motives seem a bit creepy, the actions motivated might be those we have good reasons to do anyway.

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  8. David Wallace Avatar
    David Wallace

    I always feel a little bad about George Lucas condemnation. What seems to be the lasting contribution of Star Wars is the richness of the setting, and that really does seem to be down to Lucas. It’s a great shame that he seems to be a pretty poor director and dialogist, and an even greater shame that by the second trilogy there were fewer restraining influences on those weaknesses, but I think the fact that so many people are so annoyed about them testifies to the lasting value of the SW setting. (Look at Bioware’s Knights of the Old Republic computer-game series for illustrations of what happens when people who actually do have a good sense of dialogue and cinematics pick up Lucas’s worldbuilding and run with it.)
    (I’d also feel bad about participating in the hijacking of the thread onto Star Wars were it not for the fact that it was self-hijacked by its author…)

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  9. Jon Cogburn Avatar
    Jon Cogburn

    Yeah, these are excellent points, and I recently watched Revenge of the Sith and (heresy!) like only the Empire Strikes Back better. I didn’t mind Jar Jar as a character, but found much of the slapstick of the first one to be ruinous (peaking in horribleness with the young Anakin’s “Home Alone” type shenanigans leading to the victory of the Battle of Naboo). I’ve never been able to finish watching the second one because of the wooden dialogue between Anakin and Padme.
    I played the MMORPG “The Old Republic” (based on the Bioware games) for a few weeks and it was so addicting I had to stop. It’s the first MMORPG that I actually enjoyed. The integration of story elements made you feel like you were actually making a difference in the world. This provided one way of effectively squaring the circle between WOW and Eve. WOW and all the clones are easy to play, but they have no meaning because every time you complete a quest the bad guys just respawn and there is no meaningful narrative development with respect to the quests. Eve is a real sandbox with an actual history determined by the players, but the time sink is excruciating. The Old Republic has respawning, but doesn’t feel that way because the world is so realized and the narratives are so compelling.
    In part because this is something I share with my kids, I’ve started recently reading the Expanded Universe novels and some of them are pretty amazing. It’s great to have such a fully realized world with a history that you want to find out about.
    I think that this kind of thing actually causes a problem for Lewis’ “set of possible worlds” accounts of the semantics of fiction. The phenomenology is that you are dealing with one world and that it would be possible for an author to misdescribe that world. The aesthetic triumph of Lucas’ Expanded Universe is that the novels so rarely feel like the author is getting it wrong.
    There’s a moral triumph as well. My six year old son really has an intuitive understanding of the different sides of the force and we’re able to have pretty sophisticated (for a six year old) discussions about ethics when the backdrop is the Star Wars galaxy. For Thomas, Jesus really has nothing on Qui Gon Jinn and Obi Wan Kenobi.

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  10. Bruce Russell Avatar
    Bruce Russell

    I began with the paragraph in which I distinguish rationality from reasons because Sterba mostly talks about reasons, though begins by understanding the “why be moral?” question in terms of rationality. Couching his argument in terms of reasons makes things much simpler and actually adheres more closely to the terms he uses. Then I give what I thought was a very clear presentation of his two central arguments: one to the conclusion that not begging the question requires the egoist to accept the High-Low Thesis (high-ranking egoistic reasons trump low-ranking altruistic ones and vice versa) and the other to the conclusion that morality requires strict equality. I then criticize those arguments, sometimes trying to offer help where I think it can be given; other times not because I don’t think it can be given. At the end I conclude that the requirement of strict equality is counterintuitive and that the notion of a decent life, vague. So what should we aim for? That everyone have at least a decent life on an interpretation of that notion that allows for a decent life to be a very good one. And how should we achieve that? WE (meaning everyone in the world) should aim to use renewable resources and to limit OUR population. I don’t think that claim is gratuitous in the context. Sterba’ proposal is too stringent when understood in terms of strict equality, vague when interpreted to require “a decent life.” So let’s interpret it liberally and if anyone asks, “But how can we achieve it when so interpreted? Isn’t that proposal impractical?”, I provide an answer that is even friendly to what Sterba sometimes says. How have I been “too intrusive?” I have tried to offer Sterba’s argument in a clear and concise manner and then to criticize it where I thought it was weak. I was asked to write a “critical” review and in some cases I have criticized but also given a friendly reply on Sterba’s behalf!

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